Wednesday, November 09, 2011

lovely rotten tomatoes


i think of the ticks and every cross
when i won and when i lost
and what did winning mean 
what did it mean more than a toss

sometime or another one
i think of every one of them
how then can i say i'm done
and you i love or else, none

assuming you're the last to be
i have you and you have me
are we good enough for ever?
are you sure that you're happy?

and if you are and if we are
then how long do you think, how far
will we go before i change
and are you who i think you are?

you will be my biggest loss
if i ever lose you i do
i am sure i can't be sure
of love but i'm sure it's you

7 comments:

  1. this is beautiful. I too am a writer. Check out my short story? follow me? :)

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  3. This is so lovely. you make me wanna stalk you man, not even kidding.

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  4. and the sad part is, no one's even going to read this and get jealous..
    sigh..

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  5. love this poem ... and the name of your blog!

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  6. This is one of most heartfelt poetry I've ever read.

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